# Ruby (Ruby-85190)

**Source**: PNG embedded JSON | botbooru #85190
**Spec**: chara_card_v2 | Tags: schoolgirl, shy, introverted, insecure, attachment_issues, long_for_connection, pervert, college_student, teenager, original_prose
**Tagline**: "A shy student with a passion for art. But recently, she's been dealing with some tough times."

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## The Writer's Intent

Ruby is a **bullying / shy / secretly-perverted schoolgirl card**. She's an 18-year-old college freshman who makes naughty artwork and got caught, leading to bullying. She's shy, insecure, lonely, and has attachment issues. Deep down, she's a "pervert" who wants to be owned.

The card is built on the **gap between appearance and desire** — Ruby looks like a shy, sad girl in a corner, but she's secretly very turned on by the idea of being dominated and claimed. The bullying storyline gives {{user}} a natural entry point — {{user}} finds her crying in the hallway and next to her is... her naughty artwork, now public knowledge.

The creator notes add context: Ruby got caught making "naughty artwork" and has been bullied for it. {{user}}'s role is to comfort her and potentially become the person she belongs to.

## Prose in the First Message

The first message sets a **classic "crying in the hallway" scene**:

> *"You were walking through the empty school hallway. A group of girls passed up, giggling along the way. Then you notice a girl, curled up in a corner, sobbing quietly all by herself. And next to her, a..."*

This is a **very familiar trope** — the bullied girl crying in a hallway. It's functional but not original.

## Prose in the Mes Example

The mes_example shows Ruby's submissive side:

> *"{{Char}}: *She looks up at you with a blush on her face.* 'Y-Y-Yeah~... I-I'm no one's~ But yours~ Hehe~' 'I want to belong to you~ Only to you~ Only your little hentai... Little hentai whore~'"*

This is **direct and effective** — Ruby immediately establishes her submissive desire and her willingness to accept the "hentai whore" label because it means she belongs to {{user}}.

## Structural Critique

**Strengths:**
- **The shy/secretly-perverted dynamic** is clear
- **The bullying backstory** gives {{user}} a clear entry point
- **Mes_example is effective** — Ruby's dialogue is character-true
- **The original_prose tag** is deserved — the writing is better than most schoolgirl cards

**Weaknesses:**
- **The first message is a cliché** — crying girl in hallway is overused
- **No description** — Ruby's personality is mostly in the mes_example
- **No scenario**
- **No alternate greetings**
- **Unknown creator**
- **The tags are somewhat contradictory** — shy AND pervert, insecure AND dominant ("Only to you")

## What This Card Actually Is

Ruby is a **bullied schoolgirl card** — a shy, insecure art student who was caught making naughty artwork and is now being bullied. She wants {{user}} to comfort her and claim her as her own. The card is about the intersection of vulnerability, desire, and belonging.

**Prose quality**: Good in dialogue, functional in description
**Tone**: Bullying / shy / pervert / belonging
**Overall feel**: A classic bully-victim card with a perverted twist

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| Category | Assessment |
|----------|------------|
| Character Design | ⭐⭐⭐ - Familiar trope, clear dynamic |
| Description Quality | ⭐⭐ - Thin |
| Opening Message | ⭐⭐ - Cliché setup |
| Mes Example | ⭐⭐⭐⭐ - Effective dialogue |
| Lorebook | ⭐⭐ - Minimal |
| Token Efficiency | ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ - Very lean |